I totally agree with your comments on the first book there. I wanted more character development, and that first scene in which Senna has sex with Aenor really pinged me badly (from both directions; I would have found it a lot more realistic if Aenor was a little less eager to be fucked in that kind of situation, and actually, it would have been interesting to see Senna balked, and how he would react then).
I did think that the plan put them both - not at risk, so much, as that it was clearly going to end in both their deaths, and I wanted to see a little more of that grim emotion in Senna's thoughts.
But yeah, it needed to be longer, with more plot and less rape. Um.
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Date: 2013-01-24 02:51 pm (UTC)I did think that the plan put them both - not at risk, so much, as that it was clearly going to end in both their deaths, and I wanted to see a little more of that grim emotion in Senna's thoughts.
But yeah, it needed to be longer, with more plot and less rape. Um.